Poor English

We watches as the wind uprooted the shed, and see it slowly crumbled and finally flattened.

What did I write?? Other than poor "style" & sentence construction, I had 2 major grammatical errors within one sentence! Miss Chang, my over worked primary 6 English teacher, would be vomiting blood if she sees this! And she thought she "saved" most of us! She did save me. I really have no idea when it all started to go down hill again. Shall I blame Word for it, or have I been trying to hard to sound "singlish" ? Darn. If i were to take my GCSE O-levels again, I think can only manage a C5 for English now.

Cant even spik and rite engrish porperli, how to talk French?